Make It Forever
Have you ever seen a beautiful sunset?
Have you ever viewed an autumn moon?
They are far more beautiful
When shared with your love.
Have you ever travels by train or bus?
Have you ever boated on a beautiful lake?
They are fare more pleasant
When shared with your love.
Have you ever sat in the comfort of your home?
Have you ever dined at your favorite restaurant?
They are far more enjoyable
When shared with your love.
Have you ever vacationed down by the sea?
Have you ever vacationed up in the mountains?
They are far more exciting
When shared with your love.
Your love makes my life live.
11 comments:
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!
Amazing! a very positive thought you have expressed out there ....meaning looking for excitement in things are is setting ...wow cool imagination
Keep writing
Cheers
Wonderful. I think you observe a lot too. Please pay attention to "too" :P
Great work.
Cheers!!
Thank You Uma, Dawn and Comfortably Numb.
Hi,
Wonderful. I think you observe a lot too.Good Luck......
Welcome to my blog....
Too bad I did not understand English. I found your blog so cozy.
But I liked to be here.
A kiss
Hey Lubna wat a grt personality u r yar... first time looking here this page. beautiful verses... like yr Hurt, pain unheard and love so beautiful da....
I too write small verse in Tamil but not in recent days....
Simply beautiful...
Lovely poem..I love poetry..Didnt know you write such lovely poems..
Hi Lubna, that's a heart touching poem! i dint know u r a poet too..keep it up dear:)
Thank you Susan, Lima, Hijabee, Hema, Meena, Paru and Keerthana.
Post a Comment