Monday, November 3, 2008

Make It Forever

Have you ever seen a beautiful sunset?
Have you ever viewed an autumn moon?
They are far more beautiful
When shared with your love.
Have you ever travels by train or bus?
Have you ever boated on a beautiful lake?
They are fare more pleasant
When shared with your love.
Have you ever sat in the comfort of your home?
Have you ever dined at your favorite restaurant?
They are far more enjoyable
When shared with your love.
Have you ever vacationed down by the sea?
Have you ever vacationed up in the mountains?
They are far more exciting
When shared with your love.
Your love makes my life live.

11 comments:

Uma November 7, 2008 at 12:01 AM  

Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job dear!

Dawn November 7, 2008 at 12:16 PM  

Amazing! a very positive thought you have expressed out there ....meaning looking for excitement in things are is setting ...wow cool imagination
Keep writing
Cheers

Comfortably Numb November 9, 2008 at 5:00 PM  

Wonderful. I think you observe a lot too. Please pay attention to "too" :P
Great work.

Cheers!!

lubnakarim06 November 12, 2008 at 7:29 PM  

Thank You Uma, Dawn and Comfortably Numb.

Femin Susan November 21, 2008 at 7:27 AM  

Hi,
Wonderful. I think you observe a lot too.Good Luck......
Welcome to my blog....

Cláudia Lima November 27, 2008 at 10:15 AM  

Too bad I did not understand English. I found your blog so cozy.
But I liked to be here.
A kiss

Adlak's tiny world December 6, 2008 at 4:35 PM  

Hey Lubna wat a grt personality u r yar... first time looking here this page. beautiful verses... like yr Hurt, pain unheard and love so beautiful da....

I too write small verse in Tamil but not in recent days....

Paru ... January 9, 2009 at 7:25 AM  

Lovely poem..I love poetry..Didnt know you write such lovely poems..

LifenSpice January 9, 2009 at 1:36 PM  

Hi Lubna, that's a heart touching poem! i dint know u r a poet too..keep it up dear:)

lubnakarim06 January 21, 2009 at 1:50 PM  

Thank you Susan, Lima, Hijabee, Hema, Meena, Paru and Keerthana.

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